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Sleepless

Sleeping sleepless sleep-
my family

destroyed for loving

you O prince
you sleep in satin
in scare we

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  • HereComesTheSun
    November 9
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    i love the way this is written it flows quite nicely thanks for entering


  • penman gold member
    November 8
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    Wonderful

    What a great write, short, but very well one. best of luck in the contest