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Full Circle

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Full circle turns another

In the rise of new dawn

gently,

each bud blooms petal

embrace warmth after the still freeze

scented drifts through patterns

lacy edges appear dancing.

 

Songs echo our awakening

lighter morn peeps where shadows once shaded

Alive,

their tipped wings fledged first flight

solitary to the flutter.

 

Arched embers breech clock of orange

burnished laughter

glows blush teenage years

fading upon crisp footing

each step an horizon to follow.

 

Full circle turns another

last fall new snow

freshly baked aroma to which

beacon the freeze after the still warmth

rests...

 

 

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Invite only - Change of Seasons

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  • Peripatetic gold member
    November 21
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    Rather than a stream of consciousness the thoughts are connected in a turning cycle of consciousness. The circles turn with mornings appearing and seasons rising on their images for all the senses rolling one into another in the phrasing of the verses.


  • daviscth
    November 6

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    This is just beautiful Julie. I was hoping you would find time to join this contest. Your entry far outshines my feeble attempt. lol Good luck sis. Love you


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 6

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    Excellent penning dear
    The imagery here is absolutely stunning..this should do very well
    love & light David