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That Song

Wading through the salt and sand,
The waves command beach.
Thier single power only surpassed,
By thier one time beauty.
You shared this moment with me,
A beautiful person,
Surrounded by beautiful things to see.
You said you wanted a song,
You love music and haven't gotten one.
I may not love you but at least you're songworthy to someone.

So now you get to say,
You're so songworthy.
You're intimately,
Intertwined amongst these new guitar strings.
Though I wouldn't mind romance,
If thats not whats on our paths,
You can keep the song anyway.

I'm spontaneous,
You're pragmatic,
And the way you beat yourself up could make me sick.
But the smile on your face when you get taken away,
Is more than enough to balance it all out for me.
You want to be made oh so small,
My arms and bed are big enough for us to cuddle.

I have Netflix if you're interested,
In me or movies we could see.
Next time that you're craving tea,
I'd gladly be the company you keep.
Be it friendly or amiably...

So now you get to say,
You're so songworthy.
You're intimately,
Intertwined amongst these new guitar strings.
Though I wouldn't mind romance,
If thats not whats on our paths,
You can keep the song anyway.

-Glenn Gutkowski

Author notes

So I'm hanging out with this girl, an aquiantance whom I've had dinner with like once, who just happens to be single. We hang out one night for tea and her and I end up hanging out from 12 to 1030am and really have a good time getting to know one another. She's a really strong, independant woman, but also has a really soft side... she just wants to be loved. I admire a person in my same position. However, she says she has never had a song written about her and I just so happen to be half decent at writing music so I decided I'd write a song not about loving her but just about how fucking cool she really is. If anything happens, it happens. If not, she still has a song written about her. So it all works out.

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