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Virtual Crime


Screen to screen
from time to time,
Sharing of thoughts
with a click on "enter"

Revealing truth of self
Crossing unknown boundaries,
giving the name as "friendship"

Dreams of being together
faith and trust within,
Everything feels right
But noone is in "sight"

Distance creates the tide
Real life is distorted
Problems becomes unsorted
Who is this "stranger"?

Author notes

This is a poem about the harmful internet.My internet habit has taught me a lesson that I would never forget.And my message to everyone who uses internet is to be careful and protective about yourself there are very dangerous people.
take care

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  • abuyi
    November 5

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    Finally somebody has taken the initiative to write about Internet. YEs your right you should never trust any stranger through net... and you can never be too alert for it.

    about your write.. i would say its nice, straight and simple. some good points... "giving the name as "friendship""
    "But none is in "sight"" _typo


    then how are you? its long time since i've read your work. sorry for not reading.. i just dont feel poetic nowadays

    thanks for sharing this with me
    love abuyi


    • Princess-nee
      November 5
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      I have met some internet mind hacker.Worse has happened but then I've got inspiration to write this piece
      Thankyou for the comment.Where have you been,yeah it's been quite a long time.


      • abuyi
        November 5
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        wooo.. what is a mind hacker??

        • Princess-nee
          November 5

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          lol I just said that in my own words.It means someone played mind games with me it began with friendship and ended with problems.And even more disastrous than that they began to blackmail me.


          • abuyi
            November 5
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            I hope you have learned your lesson
            blackmailed you.. i am kinda curious now.. how did u get rid of him//?


            • Princess-nee
              November 5
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              Yeah I did learn a big lesson.I got rid by blocking and staying away no contact with him.It was awful.

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