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Noon Looked Like Midnight

 

 

 

 

Star light, star bright,

here is the wish—

 

I wish tonight:

 

 

 

 

To stop taking out sorrow

on my unguarded skin;

 

wide eyed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sgking123 silver member
    November 8
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    wow

    few ords..that leave telling impact..sorrow.....you do not want it to touch your skin aslo...you buffer alot of carefull insight iin here....which startlights were these


  • islekine gold member
    November 5

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    Another interesting take!

    Thanks for sharing!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • AngelicDreams
    November 5

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    I think this is a wish shared by many.

    Best wishes in the contest!!


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 5

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    Very deep write. Great take on the prompt. You did so well on this. Keep up the great writing and good luck in the contest hun!!!


  • penman gold member
    November 5

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    Excellent

    A very true and thoughtful wish. best of luck in the contest


  • Tzipora
    November 5
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    ahh, i wish that too. nicely done.


  • Enrinye
    November 5

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    I really liked this, it is short but to the poitn and it expresses you emotions very well...good luck in the contest...

    take care
    Suza

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