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upper hand.

"you are right, you are right"
i tell her again.
to satisfy my fear,
so you can finally
hear how much i love her,
how much i care,
how much Ana's given me,
how much i take,
how much i have to bare
to get through the day,
to make it OK.
to find the right balance between my love,
and my hate.
but when push comes to shove,
she has the upper hand.

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  • AliceinWonderpants
    November 5
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    "but when push comes to shove,
    she has the upper hand" very clever line! I really lke what you did there