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My thoughts exactly. It's all for the best.

i.
So many promises dangle from my nimble fingers and like a fist you've tangled all my pieces in one place... One safe place.
You breathe slowly against my neck with your dreams spilling out and onto my bare chest- This was like laying all of the cards out onto the table and you told me that you couldn't play for keeps but I wasn't playing.
Your smile crept up and against your cheeks as my hands found every weak spot God gave your body... You were a gift to me but I was already naked by the time you unwrapped the secret skin from your insecurities.

ii.
I was kissing every piece of you that clung to me; sweaters and fingers and crooked teeth.
I'm bending leaves along their edges and finding the jaded truth about what happens when you interrupt nature-
When I interrupt you in the midst of your disaster.

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Not finished.

I'm finally doing it.

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  • Confetti Fairy-x
    November 16

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    I'm bending leaves along their edges and finding the jaded truth about what happens when you interrupt nature-
    When I interrupt you in the midst of your disaster

    wonderful... i love your choice of words...

    you ok? x


  • Miss Faith
    November 6

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    really darling, I love it. beautiful.

    "You breathe slowly against my neck with your dreams spilling out and onto my bare chest- This was like laying all of the cards out onto the table and you told me that you couldn't play for keeps but I wasn't playing"
    &&&

    "When I interrupt you in the midst of your disaster."


  • Hell In Harmony
    November 5

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    i liked this best so far:

    I'm bending leaves along their edges and finding the jaded truth about what happens when you interrupt nature-

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