we sat hunchback against the wall,
eyes bloodshot
taking in everything;
smiling.
Author notes
"Star light, star bright...
here is the wish...I wish tonight:
10 minutes.
11 words.
A contest entry
- Quick! 8 poets....10 minutes...11 words...finish the thought... by islekine.
700 points, ended November 5, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honest thoughts. thank you
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This is such a great piece on simplicity. I loved the title. I loved the subtle tones of love and just happiness in general. Nicely done and congrats on the HM.
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Your poetry is actually beautiful. I love how you make this so simple... and yet enclose so much emotion. Supremely well done.
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lol.
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Nothing more to say than simply beautiful and amazing. Well done and congrats to you.
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Here, I envision those special moments people share after smoking a joint together. beautiful. lol
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lol. thats exactly what i was trying to do
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Interesting
Very creative take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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Different and very interesting!!!
Best wishes in the contest!! -
Well done here. A very different thought for this prompt. Good luck to you with it and thanks for sharing it here!
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Interesting take!
Thanks for entering!
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...
and
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Definitley different from what comes to mind first off when reading the prompt but excellent work. You did great with this, and it's original, kudos for that! Good luck in the contest!
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Loved this.
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