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It's You My Darling

I walk along the water's edge
In the moonlight my darling with thee
You are only in my thoughts
Someday you'll be here with me

I count the many long long months
Since you went your way
Deciding we should be apart
What more could I dare say

I had to let you go your way
That's the only true test you see
Then you will know our love is true
That you belong with me

Living your life with your friends
Soon you will know if the choice is right
Finding someone new my love
Is just a part of your flight

The water is so nice and warm
The moon is oh so bright
Just like our many moonlight swims
We had on special nights

Who is that Chap running my way
I can't believe my eyes, but it's true
This Chap is no one else my love
But you my darling, yes you

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 18
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    Very nice work here

    Oh the vision of a dream coming to life .Very well written indeed


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 5

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    Awww, this is very sweet!
    It's a wonderful feeling to know that your love has stood
    the test of time when you can let go of that speical
    someone and they return to you later on. Lovely thoughts
    and rhyme as well as flow here. Great job my friend!




    Jeremy0826


    • Katie Lazette
      November 5
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      Thank you Jeremy0826. You always have something nice to comment on in my poetry. I really appreciate this.


      • Jeremy0826 silver member
        November 5
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        You are very welcome Katie, always a pleasure to read you!



        Jeremy

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