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A Shimmering Desire

"Star light, star bright...here is the wish... I wish tonight

                     may love
 
                                   illumined

                                              every heart,

                                                     becoming a star

                                                                blessing other’s desires

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 5

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    awwwww I agree

     

    very lovely......

     

    God bless you my friend...

  • Aww... beautiful write. I love it. You did a great job with the prompt. Keep up the great writing and good luck in the contest!!


  • Enrinye
    November 5

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    wow, this is really touching and moving, in just a few words you expressed so much emotion, that´s true writing to me...may your wish come true one day...

    take care
    Suza


  • Tzipora
    November 5
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    nicely done.


  • February Moon gold member
    November 5
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    I really liked this.


  • islekine gold member
    November 5

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    Wonderful sentiment!

    Wouldn't it be nice it your wish came true? thanks for entering!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 5
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    That's very beautiful and I love how you spaced it all out. Great job as always my friend and good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826

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