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Sad Sad Day

Ah Lenny, what can I say,
you had to go and ruin my day.
Hearing you weren't feeling well,
has kind of shot my day to hell.

Ya had to go and pull that muscle,
and put life in an awful tussle.
Now you are stuck in that bed,
with visions of nurses in your head.

I'll tell you what lets make a deal,
if you promise to hurry and heal.
They will let you go back home,
and I won't tickle your funny bone.


Sorry to hear you're in the hospital Lenny. Hope all is better soon. I hope this poem gives you a chuckle or two.

Whyspr

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I labeled this adult for the one cuss word in it, nothing disasterous in here

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  • Shakes-spear
    November 20
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    very cute

    I'm sure this will get him on the recovery road. Or was that load? Whatever! Good luck in the contest, The Shaker


  • galfalfa gold member
    November 14
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    Lenny loved it, it raised his spirits as much as they could be raised in his condition

    thank you!


  • Desire gold member
    November 5

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    Precious~

    Oh My this is a Beauty and how can One not smile
    or feel better after reading this~
    Love the Sentiments also Your tight rhyme~
    Message that touches deep~
    Adore the words: visions of nurses in your head
    Brilliant
    Woot

    Keep that quill shaking Sweet One
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Talent
    Best wishes in the contest~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~