You know how to touch yourself; boy, you must feel great
Even though most people like to do it everyday
There's really nothing special about what you have to say
No one really cares that you like to masturbate
There is nothing sensual about playing with your clit
It doesn't make me horny when you say you're wet and slick
There's no way you can make it more special than the rest
and it's really cliche to grab on to your own breasts
I don't care how you say that your skin is so soft
There's nothing special about jacking off
It's not some beautiful moment bestowed from above
It's the same shitty life when you're finished and done
Author notes
I chose to respond to your poem, Touching Myself. Love the contest by the way.
A contest entry
- Think you know how to argue, well prove it for 1000 points, PW allowed.. by Misskaoz.
1200 points, ended November 19, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
No questions, just tell me your full leangth, uncensored opinion.
Comments
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i loved it.
made me laugh
which is what i needed to start off my day
~Renee
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hilarious.... great write. I loved it
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I didn't that same punk energy can be used to oppose DIY but you just showed me.
Great rhymes, although the rhyme scheme changes but that's just nitpicking.
Great job
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Different...but in a great way
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Hahahaha that waS the best i ever read- yes i ever read! it had meh laughin for real.
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This made me laugh quite hard. I really dig your style of writing.
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I don't know if this is the response you wanted, but this poem had me laughing so hard, " My favorite line " it's really cliche to grab on to your own breast".
Great Job and great argument. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Thanks, and I'm glad you got a good laugh out of it.
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