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Times of the Blue Moon

Staring unmovingly at that dauntless blue moon.  I see my life flash before my eyes.  From when I was a young boy to the man I became.  No matter what anyone does or says, there will always be regrets.  Regrets, that poison our soul, and warn us never to do them, ever again.

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I dont know why it shows it saying eyes twice

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  • This is an amazing write. I truly think it is and I really loved this. The last line, "Regrets, that poison our soul, and warn us never to them, ever again." It really brings the whole piece together. Major kudos dear! Keep on writing!


  • ZachP silver member
    November 5

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    That is so very true. Yes, we will always have regrets,
    and I have my own share of them that weigh down my heart.
    Remember, though; your regrets aren't your life,
    and don't let them stop you from living it.

    Ok?
    I wish you the very best,
    Zach Estel.