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Circus Freaks

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These amazing wonderful and

artful twins will tell you a tale

a horriful tale of their despair

of how they became freaks.

 

Two beautiful wonderful woman

with the ability to make a single

scar or mark upon their body

shimmer and grow into a design.

 

Soon though they loose their beauty

as they work their magic and change

their looks down to the color tone of

their hair and their skin.

 

But instead of their beauty in their skin

they show it in their magic as they work

it on you making you entranced in what

they do as a living.

 

But one has a gift unique to her along she

can take you and make you do whatever

she decides so beware of making

her angry for it might be the end of you.

 

And the others gift which is unique to her

is to be able to take any shape she wishes

from animal to plant to any human being

she wishes.

 

So beware of angering either of these

wonderful woman, these terrifying twins

will make sure you will regret it to the

very end of your days.

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  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 24
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    Ah, you think a twin is single and looking for me?
    Nah, I so want to hear more of this story, maybe....


  • Mrs. Kodak
    November 20
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    wow I would have never imagined this image viewed like this but you painted a beautifully horrifying picture that would certainly be cause to abide by the old cliche "don't judge a book by it's cover".
    I enjoyed this piece, it really caught my attention very well.


  • Concrete Angel silver member
    November 12

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    This is a fantastic wonderful tale you wove. You painted a picture of these two vividly and chillingly. I know for sure that I wouldn't want to cross them! There is one thing I have to point out that I'm sad to point out however One of my contest's rules is that your entry cannot be entered in any other contest until this one is over.

    8. I would prefer that entries to this contest do not get entered in any other contest while this one is open. Doing that makes it seem like it’s just not good enough to wait and see if you’ve won anything here. So, if your poem is placed in any other contest this rule will be copied to my comment and your poem will be DQ’ed and removed.

    Since I really did enjoy this poem a lot I will give you the choice to remove it from the other contests you added it to so it can stay in the running here, or you can remove it from this one. It will have to be one way or the other because I have to enforce my own rules or that wouldn't be fair to others Please don't think I'm getting on to you or anything, I'm just pointing out the rule you might have missed
    I really did enjoy this and hope that you will comply with the rule to stay in the running in my contest!


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    November 5

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    "So beware of angrying either of these " ANGRYING should be ANGERING

    "is to beable to take any shape she wishes"
    BEABLE should be BE ABLE


    Other then these two things it was very well wrtten. It tells a dark tale and it sends shivers down the spine. Thank you for sharing thi