Are you the one for me
The one I'm waiting for
Without you no light I see
Can not breathe soon anymore
I wish you knew my dear
My heart it lives for you
You are in every tear
Falls from my eyes so blue
I love you more than words can say
But you don't seem to know
I'm hoping every day
That the pain will go
But I know it is to last
It makes me go soon mad
Nothing is killing you as fast
As a heart that is so sad
I wish I would not care
Way too lovely you just are
This no longer I can bear
The end is not too far
So hear my cry tonight
My angel come and save
Bring me back to light
Or weep above my grave
Author notes
*ilovedyou*
A contest entry
- I like to think you love me.. by Coloured Skies.
400 points, ended November 15, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent poem. I know this pain of love and wishing for a grave.
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This is so full of pain and conflict! I hope it is resolved soon for you. It seems to be a common theme in your poetry. The last few stanzas really yanked at my heart~
Karen
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heartwrenching
this made my heart ache
The last stanza blew me away
Keep the ink flowing
fire
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this is a good poem..
enjoyed this poem...
has a nice feel to it..
really liked the last stanza..
So hear my cry tonight
My angel come and save
Bring me back to light
Or weep above my grave
a nice way to end it...
well done and keep up the great work
Jayde
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so powerful to read, I liked the emotion and effort put into this.
Thankyou very much for taking your time to enter and good luck in the contest.
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