His Soul
My Heart! ~~ My Goal: ~~
One diamond; One whole!
Sublimity conceives Honor;
Loyalty conjoined with Gratitude: Twin
Sisters wield Right's Sword of Justice!
Fraternal strings of Love
Sing True Heart's song:
His Soul.
Author notes
Rictameter
2,4,6,8,10,8,6,.4,.2
first two syllables are the last two syllables
A contest entry
- Pick A Form; Any Form by Heavenly Angel.
900 points, ended November 18, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Rictameter - I love this form of poetry. It sort of takes the mind out of 'doing' into just 'observing'. -- nicely done. I enjoyed reading.
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Very nice rictameter. Those are a lot of fun to do and challenging to make them flow. You pulled it off very nicely. Keep on penning and using your imagery. Thank you for allowing me the chance to read your art in poetry form.
Brook -
Wow~
Oh My~
this is a Beauty ~
Magnificent Message You have weaved here my Friend
and in a form I personally Adore working with
Love the words: One diamond- One whole!
Also other Attributes to make the process complete
Powerful words weaved to touch Spirit deep
Excellent~ Bravo Beautiful!
Keep that quill dancing Precious One
Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Talent
Best wishes in the contest~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Perfect!;
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Very nice
Truly enjoyed this piece!
Thank you so much for sharing and for being part of this contest; good luck to you in all your writing endeavors!
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