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Night's Dance

Moonlight’s glimmer
Touches our skin
Dancing together in ways indescribable

Your skin drifting
So soft and so warm
Across the cool surface
Of flesh that I give

Your whispers are speaking
So much louder than words
Each sigh leaves my lips
As your name

Sweet white wine
Drinking down
Your passions

Quivering flesh
My eyes flutter closed
Your hands on my skin
Like the mist of a dream

And you are so
Serene in your words
You murmur my name
Like a summoning of pleasure

And I arch to your body
Writhing delicately
Graceful
Our dance
Moves to the beat
Of our broken hearts

As we are healing together
And melding as one
Two bodies as a single soul
I feel tears in my eyes

As the wistful thoughts of slumber
Take hold
I do not want to sleep

Let the night stretch on
Let instant stop
Just one more time
In timeless existence
Let us be one.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 30
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    Inspirational and romantic! Thank you so much for entering!


  • BluRosePoet8488
    November 13

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    OOOoooooo... a deep, rich experience here. I like! I like! Well written. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • sidewinder silver member
    November 10

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    thy words touch in that dance of two people where romance blooms between two hearts arisen in time'.

    yes my friend you have me smiling here ...reminding me on memories arisen from my own past


    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • Ms Lez
    November 7

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    And I arch to your body
    Writhing delicately
    Graceful
    Our dance
    Moves to the beat
    Of our broken hearts.

    Really graceful and soothing


  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 7
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    Love it!


  • Mr Kite
    November 5

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    ^^, bootiful, beautiful, bootiful.

    I like it, it has a mix of rhythm and rhyme. I'm not one to read poetry, but I enjoyed it thoroughly. Different parts of it remind me of certain things, I'm just wondering if it relates to us<333, bwuaahahahah. -kisses cheek-

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