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Precious Bane

With muscular arms and amazing stature, you surround me,
engulfing me with your presence and I feel warmth all around.
Your precious bane hangs from your neck, no way to be separated.
I smile and embrace you, holding tight for what feels like hours.
It’s so good to see you again.
It’s so good to feel you again.
My heart beats faster and I feel happy just thinking about you.
I never want to lose these kind of moments,
never want to lose you.
I will never let go, you don’t understand
when I smile through my eyes - that smile for no one else,
no one else but My Precious Bane.

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  • Failed-Dreamer
    November 13
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    Beautiful.


  • Antebellum
    November 13
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    It’s so good to see you again.
    It’s so good to feel you again.
    My heart beats faster and I feel happy just thinking about you.
    ..
    i love this. i can relate to this so well.
    thank you for entering, best of luck.

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