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Love Demands

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People dying, children crying,

mystifying

 

lend a hand...

 

give a gift, a gift given

unifying

 

to expand...

 

pass it forward,

life's are altered

 

when we stand....

 

for each other,

help another

 

be a strand...

 

chain of hope

can't be broken

 

when we band...

 

all together,

lift your brother

 

love demands...

 

 

 

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  • shunsuke
    November 12
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    AWSOME POE


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    November 10
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    Great flow...this reads well and speaks the point loud and clear...yes...love demands...


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 8
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    love this, give peace and love a chance
    so beautiful

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • lilangelsnemesis gold member
    November 8
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    I like the flow of this alot!

    lilangel'snemesis


  • black-waters
    November 7
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    This is amazing. You keep a good flow through the whole poem. [:


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 7
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    Swiftly moving, motivating words!!

    A rhythmic romp!

    M-C


  • Providence
    November 6

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    This is a creed for life! If only more understood how much one receives from giving! This whould be posted in schools and in the halls of government!

    B-R-A-V-O!

    Marianne

  • goalsv
    November 6
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    Very well written and so full of hope and positive energy. Well done.


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    November 6
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    Clappies didn't work


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    November 6
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    My own personal favourite in this contest. I enjoy variations in rhyming poetry, this was cleverly done


  • humblpye gold member
    November 6

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    Great picture, great message, great poem...yes my dear I am standing, just as i have stood before, with my candles and my flags...counting the body bags...

    Thank you for sharing the eternal cry for peace


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 5

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    Wonderful...


    Lovely... "Love Demands" sings to harmony and Humanity. Beautiful composition, inspiring and guiding. A majestic poem.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmaneul Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 5

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    LOVELY SENTIMENTS!!!!!!

    I don't know why but your lovely words bring to my mind the subject of the movie PAY IT FORWARD, this I have always believed was Jesus's message, the one which was the basis of all he taught.'s


  • Genevieve79
    November 5
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    Flows so well and such a lovely expression of harmony The picture is great too! good luck in the contest!


  • BluesMan gold member
    November 5

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    We are all brothers and sisters on this earth we share under the sun. It's a shame that we live in a brave new world of cowards!!! You poem is a wonderful whirlwind of positive sentiments. I very much enjoyed the read.

    Bill


  • Tqop
    November 5

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    Right on! The best way we can help others sometimes is simply praying for them, and praying to God asking him: "How can I help others?" Great job on the poem. You've got great talent. You should publish.


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 5

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    Amazing write as always, I absolutely love the message in this piece. It moved me. Wouldn't it just be great if people could just lend a hand to dry a tear, help one in need, or just give a caring squeeze in the hand of one who is suffering. Wow just wow is all I can say. I also adore the picture you have with this write. Absolutely beautiful!


  • AngelicDreams
    November 5
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    The poem has some lovely thoughts
    Also, great picture!!

    AND....

    I love you for entering the contest!!! lol

    Good luck in the contest!!


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    November 5
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    Luv the rhyme scheme.

  • sleepinglion
    November 5

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    A poem of hope and Love Kathy, in a seemingly hopeless world. I feel I have lost my edge of positivity where hope (for the world) is concerned. When I was a young man, I was this poem. It is just as well that old fossils die out and hope springs anew with each baby born
    David


  • islekine gold member
    November 5

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    Love the picture ...and the

    sentiments! I agree 100%!!
    Thanks so much for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


    YOU MAY SEND YOUR VOTES ANYTIME! SOONER THE BETTER! BEST WISHES....


  • who iam
    November 5

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    The gift of love to our fellow beings is by far the greatest of all.He said it ,and it's up to each of us to act upon His words in all that we do while on this earth.
    Full of sentment and love for all mankind...
    Nicely done !


  • Rovingone gold member
    November 5
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    Great sentiments. I agree. But, didn't you know that love makes no demands? Great poem Kathy, just kidding.


  • xxemo-kissesxx
    November 5
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    cool

    i like it. its nice

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