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A Rare View

The rarity of fluid on the surface,
does not erase the veracity
of its abundance,
that the fruit is made of.

For its succulent contours
are only a small reality,
but the majority prevails
with its magnificent stream;
of unrestrained kindness.

The quenching nectar,
permeating the sweltering burrow;
overwhelms the arid essence.

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 5

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    the heart of the matter prevails for the fruit is always the flavor in life.. well said hun and thank you for penning for me Hugs always Angel♥


    • chinmay
      November 6
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      Thanks, Angel. It's pleasure participating in your contests chiefly for two reasons - one for the brilliant prompts, another for you.