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Here I

I stand alone even when
darkness of afflictive
is my floor, even when
the crooked succinct calls,
tries to befriend, to woo;
even when the angel falls
beside me in quest for truth-
I'm with spine not rose, for
rose tries to steal my soul
while pine pains to return.
The shine of angled appears
first but darkness behind
explored last;
noticed last the true light
behind angel befallen.
Here I stand alone even
when you- the wrong, the easy,
the illusion, the success
of matter-
attempt allure

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 5

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     Here I stand alone even
    when you- the wrong, the easy,
    the illusion, the success
    of matter-
    attempt allure

    I love these lines

     

    a seductive little piece with a hint of fruit in the air.with a hint of darkness and despair.. i love the way you took this prompt well said.. Thank you for penning for me Hugs Angel♥.