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Laying across my silken sheets
With all my dearest thoughts, I
entreat them come to me ...
as my bed becomes the sea and I
a drift, set sail across the pond,
where my love lies somewhere beyond,
His warmth and kiss so tender
with all my heart I surrender...
Lie with me in this unmade bed
whisper to me all things unsaid
until that moment I do dread
When my eyes open to an empty bed.

Author notes

For My Darling Friend Tony - his 2nd poem - words-n-stuff

Prompt 2 :
Love - Sad/happy/undying/beautiful/broken/ugly blah

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  • penman gold member
    November 8
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well written. A terrific write. Best of luck in the contest


    • guardianhost gold member
      November 9
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      Thank you for reading and commenting on Words

      I am honored that you stopped by , please visit me again.
      Your always welcome here, Thank you for your kind comment.
      My inspiration is a great gentleman in my life.
      Your Friend,
      Cheryl


  • evershine-90
    November 7

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    Awww A beautiful write. I loved the beautiful imagery and the tender feel to this piece. Well done! Thank you so much for your entry! Best wishes!

    • guardianhost gold member
      November 7
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      Thank you for your kind comment

      Thank you for taking your time to read and comment on me.
      Sincerely,
      Cheryl


  • words-n-stuff gold member
    November 6

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    Wow !!!

    This made my heart race ! ...I am lost for words ... such an invitation ..... It put me right there beside you across the pond.
    Wait for me


  • glenn shannon silver member
    November 5

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    well hun i was awake at 330 am today coz i had a dream of a similar kind and so had to come here and read my bed wasnt enpty when i woke tho moodog was taking up 3 parts of it lol not quite what i had in mind but loved your interpretation of your sensual dreams bless you glenn hugs xo


    • guardianhost gold member
      November 5
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      Yes, well I woke with the purring adoration of my Devon REX Feline bedwarmers.

      They like to snuggle but I am still alone.
      How are your 11 cats doing?
      Moodog is a charmer, thank you my friend for reading and commenting on my poem.

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