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A Discerning Tone

In a world of multiple choices,
the people are robbed off
the faculty to choose;
‘cause beyond a certain point,
abundance makes one pervert,
and turns the seed of a hope,
into vulgar disposition.

The difference is between
the choices offered and
options worked out;
one is inertia and
the other is plausible.

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Prompt: Choice

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  • This was wonderfully penned. I absolutely loved that second stanza. Thank you so much for entering my contest.


  • Stickboy
    November 5

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    this makes sense to me thought these same thoughts. best of luck in the contest, great job on this
    Sean

    • chinmay
      November 6
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      Thanks a lot, Sean. Glad that you share the thoughts.