Autumns Sight
Color
fades away and
shows the bitter ending
of this season of hues and leaves
falling.
Winters White
Blizzard
winds bursting fierce.
Crystalizing bones form
as intense frigidness begins
today.
A contest entry
- Cinquaintly Fall by azure85.
1100 points, ended November 7, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please give me suggestions on what I could do to make this better. I will reward those to whomever asks and critiques with suggestions I can work with. And Thank you for reading.
Comments
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A lovely duet of the season, and they compliment each other very well. Your first one on autumn is a great snapshot of what is happening as the leaves and colors fade into winter. Thank you so much.
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True it's cold, but it's beautiful. Great job on the description of the bone chilling seasons upcoming weather.
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