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"My Hidden Fears"

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My hidden fears are kept inside
Yet they surface through the tears I cried.

Hiding my apprehensions isn't good.
I guess I'd change my outlook if I could!
Don't be afraid to be myself!
Don't put my heart upon a shelf
Even though the truth may cause me pain.
Now's the time to try and try again!

Fearing that I'll try and fail
Evokes a cowardice to no avail
And I'll never find the courage for today.
Reach out! Take a chance! Maybe, my life will be enhanced!
Stopping before I 'Start' isn't the way!


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  • Wonderful piece you have penned here, and I certainly hope that you don't stop. Always give 100% in everything that you do. You did a great job here, thank you for entering.


  • Br0kEn WiNgS
    November 7
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    this is very good and i rhymed really well, i love the emotion in this.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 5

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    didn't realize it is acrostic until the end

    made even better and very creative

     

    very well done as always Poet King

    God bless you my friend...