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A Manhattan Kiss

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The party was in its
waning hours;
little groups huddled together
spilling drinks
in lively conversations.

She found me
between mixed drinks,
between slipping chatter.

She kissed me;
tasted of sweet vermouth
and hard whiskey.

She sighed
and leaned against me
marking my shirt
with the remnants
of her lipstick.

We left
escaping redundant
lifeless dialogues
and made Manhattans
with bitters
and cherries
under a
waxing moon.

We didn’t spill a drop.

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  • Depth gold member
    November 6
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    nice

  • Rowan gold member
    November 5

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    nice, really, really nice hon.


  • stef-witt gold member
    November 5

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    This is fantastic!! Really accurately painted picture... just wonderful. I'm ready for a drink - TGIF!!


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    November 5

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    great descriptions...I could see it all play out vividly