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Forever More

Distance doesn't matter

oh! you know it's true,

you could be on a far away planet;

I would still be near to you.

 

 

You could talk Martian talk

I'd know every word you said,

if I were to have a lobotomy

you'd still be in my head.

 

 

When You exhale, I inhale

you deep within my soul.

Forever together entwined are we,

together forever we'll grow.

 

 

When time has turned our forms to ash

our energy will soar,

merged together for eternity,

it's you and me 'forever more'.

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Dedicated to my wonderful husband and soul mate

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  • Desire gold member
    November 27
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    Blessings~

    Beautiful Dedication You have penned for Your Husband
    and Love the Emotions expressed also the Energy
    with tight rhyme~
    Bravo! ~ Adore the Metaphors for they grab the Reader
    Love ~ Love
    Keep that quill & Mind dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Heart
    Best wishes in the contest Precious Spirit~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 9
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    Nice expression of tender love. And it's nice to focus our work on our loved ones.


  • humblpye gold member
    November 8
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    And so it shall be...!
    A beautiful and well thought out write my friend with yes, just a hint of humour!
    Enjoyed much!
    John


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 7
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    Clever and loving all at the same time,
    expressing your own versatility!!!

    Really great, Kathy!!!

    M-C


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 5
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    wow..

    sis, this is beautiful and loving! i bet ole hubby was wearing a smile ajax couldn't wipe clean! l.o.l. great work!


  • penman gold member
    November 5
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    Excellent

    A very lovely and thougtful write. So very spiritual and a great dedication. many blessings in the contest


  • Tqop
    November 5
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    Awe.. I love this. At first I thought you wrote this for God. hehe. Great job and you're very talented.

  • sleepinglion
    November 5

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    Loved this Kathy, laughed at that second verse

    The last line of the first verse would perhaps flow more if you said, -
    ''I would still be near to you''
    David

  • Tshepi
    November 5
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    Wow, sooo romanti

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