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The Comfort of Grounded Support

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Juxtaposed ancient history’s wealth of wisdom
gained through scars carved into surface and beyond;
stark against fresh sensuality’s kingdom
smiling droplets plump with invitation’s bond.

Flirting fresh with juicy ripeness they enthrall;
confident of what they have to offer;
posing languor teasing taste’s hypnotic call
as if their charms exchanged for well filled coffers.

Unnoticed but entrenched solidity stands;
the commitment to his task deliberate;
clear of his support for their most basic plans
constant yet invisibly considerate.

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  • Macsword
    November 8

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    One of

    my all time favorite fruits. A very fine write to go with it and Congrats on the Bronze Trophy Poet.


  • penman gold member
    November 7

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    Wonderful

    What a terrific write. So very perfect for prompt, congrats on the bronze


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 5

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    confident of what they have to offer;
    posing languor teasing taste’s hypnotic call

    I love these lines and love the way you have taken this prompt. A very deep poignant message .. well penned hun  and than you for taking the time to pen for me hugs always Angel♥