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Taste me (J edition)

On your lips..
sweet and gently whipped.

Forbidden delectable kiss.

With your gumdrop tongue...
I want to devour you...

But you want to taste me,
so tasty...yet you continue to evade me.

In this crevice is a devious lust.

Pitiful... but a definite must.

above my navel...and on the cusp...
Put your mouth on it...

I can't get enough.

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 14
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    a captivating taste.

  • mcfreeman
    November 8
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    a definite must.....

    but definitely not enough.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 6

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    Yummy, very enticing to read, thank you for entering and good luck, Josie


  • John Faulkner
    November 5

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    Nice usage of rhyme..great job..The imagery is wonderfull..very inticing..erotic,,sensual..Great write


    John


  • Lowell Poe
    November 5

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    Very wild lass....
    the rhythm of the rhyme were excellent.
    very hot.
    your comment is valued so
    knowing what a true poet you are.

    Liam

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