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The Sad Parts of Me

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The sad parts of me are quite easy to see--
Heaven only knows how I survive
Even though it hurts to be alive!

Some people say, I must find another way
Although they can't offer a solution,

Demeaning their pointless, resolution.

People telling lies are the first to analyze
Although they wear their phony masquerade.

Reality will show most of the 'Happy One's' you know

Traverse life in a falsified charade--

Such counterfeit contentment is displayed!

 

Of course, you know yourself the best--

Forget the comments of the rest--

 

Mending tears, you can't deny--.

Everyone needs time to cry!


 

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Emotion Acrostic (Sad)

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  • toomysterious
    November 11
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    Excellent poetry and the emotion is deep and haunting. And to do all that and create an Acrostic, too. You are just too good. Quit making me look bad.

  • I love that last line, it's so very true. Wonderful job with this piece, thank you so much for entering in my contest.


  • daviscth silver member
    November 5

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    Al I've decided that there isn't any prompt that you can't write for. Once again you have amazed me with this acrostic. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with me. You really brighten up my online life.