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My sweet rose~part 17

The controlling issues that is what it is
my sweet rose;
that is why I stray in my mind on some tangent
that makes no sense.

That is why I walk through my life this way.
Oh well
I still love you my sweet rose.
I'll figure myself out eventually
everyone else seems to try to figure me out,
but how could they when I can't figure out myself.

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  • nature
    November 10

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    My sweet rose....

    Quite true, when one one can't figure out what one wants how can others really know.
    But if the rose you talk about blooms it must surly be for you.


  • Kastor
    November 5

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    It is what it is and not what it aint. It'll do what it do but not what it cain't (can't).

    Or do you like

    Eternally being, all the while seeking, myself

    I think I like your head.

  • goalsv
    November 5

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    Very good, a nice reflection on life and how it goes.


    • z etoile
      November 5
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      thank you so much for your comments they mean a lot to me. I will read some of your poetry tommorrow to return the favor.

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