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Tinker

T houghts, that won't stop racing
I  f only, things were different
N ot ready to say goodbye
K nowing that this time, it's forever
E ven knowing this, I wish it were different
R emembering you, wanting only, to turn back time

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  • The Devil18
    November 5
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    wow this is good i like it nice work nobody is ready to say goodbye