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The Small Hours

(Broken Etheree)




              Night
              falling
          ink black veil


        moonlit clouds pass
        silver eye searching
      caressing tall chimneys


      thin cats wail in back alley
  where soft grey shadows leap and play


eerie silence shrouding tomb like streets
broken by gates creaking midst bitter wind

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Broken Etheree

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  • AliceinWonderpants
    November 5

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    oh my, you are amazing hehe!
    you have a real talent with words,
    "silver eye searching
    caressing tall chimneys" love it!
    if poetry was food, then this is chocolate, mmmm


  • spiritual wolf
    November 5

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    i really really liked this. that was awesome. the words had their place and were put there to create an amazing image,


    • lianonsidhe silver member
      November 5
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      Thank you for your lovely comments. I'm so glad you liked this one.
      Lianonsidhe