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Lost my way

In the dead of night,
they come to me.
The visions of my past
that have haunted me.
I try not to let them in,
but then i lose controle.
Is this my life,
or another persons sole.
I have no recognition,
of the things i see.
And through another persons eyes,
im looking at me.
Harsh thoughts and images,
they hurt me deep inside.
Im sorry for the pain i caused,
and all the times i lied.
I am begging for forgiveness,
but beggings all i do.
There is nothing that can take back,
the hurt i bestode upon you.
Im sad now,
and it grows each passing day.
Please hear my crys for help,
for i have lost my way.

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I wrote this off the bat, just explaining how i feel, may have rhymed rather poorly

did it bore you???? Does it suck ass??

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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