mellowed
ripening fruit
boughs heavy, leaves cascade
Autumn’s glory, vibrant palette
Rejoice!
boughs heavy, leaves cascade
Autumn’s glory, vibrant palette
Rejoice!
Author notes
Prompt ... Fall.
2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllable count.
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Just single cinquains, no variations.
In a list
A contest entry
- Cinquaintly Fall by azure85.
1100 points, ended November 7, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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No surprise to see you in this contest my Twin. A lovely autumn cinquain
Hugs
Jem
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Many thanks Sis ... you know me well.
Sue
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Yes, it is a happy season, full of harvest time and the joy of all the hard work from the year. It makes one remember what thankfulness is, thank you so much for your cinquain.
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Thank you for the comment and the contest
Sue
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Interesting form. Again, vivid. You must be an autumn person.
Good luck in the contest, Sue.
Tom
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Many thanks Tom, yes, I am an Autumn person ... but anything to do with the seasons suits me.
Sue
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Very beautifully captured in your words here. Lovely images of fall, although here it's pretty well over, and getting colder. The background fits well, too! Lita
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Many thanks Lita, it looks as though our Indian Summer is over at last
Sue
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Lovely!
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Thank you ... Suzie Q x
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Fruit tree
Perfectly writ
Apples sweet, gritty pears
Puts me in a mood for dinner
Must eat!
Heh heh heh heh
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I hope dinner was good!!!!
Thanks for the comment
Sue
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so lovely
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Thank you ... Sue
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