I can't sleep tonight
This bed feels so lonely
as I look to the other side.
I'd do anything to have you here so there would be someone to hold me tonight.
I couldn't sleep last night
I kept dreaming about you
kicking myself because
Im not there for you,
as often as I should.
I can't sleep without
telling you goodnight,
wishing you to have sweet dreams.
I know that I will because I always dream of you.
There's no way for me to sleep
without dreasming of you.
If i dont dream of you
i toss and turn all night,
searching forsome comfort.
I cant sleep without you on my mind.
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a very relatable piece. I remember long, cold, bitter, nights alone with my thoughts of another. gosh, its depressing and lonely
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thank u for the comment. yes its very lonely. i hold onto hope that we will have our own place, and she'll be there everyda.
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welcome
I hope it works out for ya soon ...I know the feeling and hate to ever go through it again
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Noting colder than an empty bed
You express the loneliness of a parted lover so well. The only comfort is the knowledge that he/ she will return. the poem is beautifully paced and expresses your emotions very skilfully.
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thank you for taking the time to read and comment. = ]
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awwww baby i love it
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yay! u r always in my dreams.
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so sweet and cute! I know what its like to toss and turn in bed at night trying to sleep but my mind wont stop thinking of the one i love.
Another love filled write
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thank u 4 reading. usually I cant sleep cause Im looking 4ward 2 hearing from her in the morning. = ]
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