Sensual lips
dance along your neck
drinking you in slow sips
Shadows dance on the wall
our bodies enthrall
holding your hips
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I liked the form, it flowed very nicely, wasn't too long and you used very good imagery.
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awww sweet!!!!! mmm so sensual i can feeel it!!
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An interesting form which is short and sweet. It
flowed nicely and drew a passionate image for the
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hi
I added u as a favorite.u write good
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cute
it hold so much simple pleasure, the feeling is all emphasized by the holding of the hips... very nice.
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short but one of a kind and as the poems saws that it is like fine wine, reading it i felt like i was taking a sip, keep it flowing
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What a beautiful new Compression, Robin. You do these forms of yours better than anybody; probably 'cause your the creator and master of it. This is really a beautiful, sensual piece; one that could also be classified, I think, as Erotica. (At least...what USED to be Erotica.) It conjurs a beautiful picture in the mind, making the reader wish they were partaking of ther OWN "Fine Wine." Beautiful!
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mmmmm so sensual. I love the form and the imagery!
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I like this!
A fine poem and I'm quite intrigued by the form
Thank you so much for sharing and for being part of this contest; all the best to you!
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