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Kindness is Beauty

Your kindness is beauty
Whose sweetness unfolds
Like blooms laid in poesy,
More fragrant with growth

Your kindness is surging
As love from your core
Erupts with a burning
That frees hearts immured

Your kindness is steady
A bed to rest on
With sheets that are soothing,
As soft as your arms





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  • CaptainObvious gold member
    November 7
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    I like this. Very simple, much like how I write at times. It has a nice rhythm to it.


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 6

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    This is such a tender and lovely penning, dear Scribe. How wonderful it is to see you posting regularly again, my Friend. We have missed your words, your song.


    • Lord Gegishov
      November 6

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      Thank you so very much for your kind and sweet words. You have always been such an inspiration to me. Yes, I am being held spellbound by poetry again. I sense it in everything. And I don't want to waste this moment, so I have been writing quite often, trying to rediscover myself. I feel I may have lost it for a moment, or took a detour to experience something different. Still, I am extremely satisfied with where I am, and am trying to quietly rejoin this beautiful community of poets. But how have you been? I hope life is treating you exquisitely.


      • Night Hope gold member
        November 6
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        I'm doing well, Sweetie. Come by my pages if and when you get a chance. My own writing has taken a few leaps forward in the past few months.