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Autumn

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Autumn

Bright leaves
Color the land
Painted with a skilled touch
Mother Nature’s display of art
Autumn

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  • azure85 gold member
    November 7

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    A gentle sigh of the earth as the seasons turn, and you have captured these thoughts very well within your cinquain. Thank you so much.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 6
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    Oh yes...autumn this year has been stupendous! So good to see you with this new write, S..Al the best in the contest!


  • Melodies
    November 5

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    Aye, and autumn is my favorite season by far. Next comes winter. I am always so glad when you write a new poem for us to enjoy. It comes with a beautiful cascade of leaves.


  • An Old Codger gold member
    November 5
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    Well said neighbor.

  • Topnotchsy
    November 5
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    Beautiful, soft take on autumn. Nice to see you around, I hope you are doing well.

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