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Turning Heads



if only-
I had eyes in back
of my head
She’d never know,
I couldn’t stop- looking

I’m trying to decipher
if sway of her hips,
is saying- something more

If she’d only wink,
or even smile, as she
passes by
I wouldn’t be standing here,
thinking to myself…
                                                Loser!




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I never said, I was a poet!

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  • Virgoan
    November 18

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    lol...a very familiar seen to most of us that sometimes we drift into the void of missing things that could've moved or change the course of our living.

    Thanks and regards,

    Hensley


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 5
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    hmmm....


  • crivanea silver member
    November 5

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    lol!!! that last line! so realistically said! a common event I must say wonderfully done