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Wishing Lenny Health

Lenny Wankerstein, the vivacious guy,
never cared a damn for the bawlers;
the girlfriend gifted him a jazzy tie,
and he wore it elegantly like banners.

His ardent neck held on the buy,
but the miniature muscles, to his horrors;
gave in to weighty fabric of three-ply,
and he looked like a man with plunders.

Now he is down, yet shrunken and dry,
with his head burning in pyres;
we wish him good health with a sigh,
get well soon, Lenny, relieve the sponsors.

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  • Shakes-spear
    November 20

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    well...

    I hope he gets better soon. This is cute and funny and should make him smile at least! The Shaker


  • galfalfa gold member
    November 14

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    thank you so much for your entry It will give Lenny less of a shrunken and dry feel ...i told him to get his head out of those burning pyres too


    • chinmay
      November 16
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      Thanks so much for your adorable comments. Lenny is sure going to prove us all wrong by growing stronger.