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The Shortest Story

It began with a
Kiss,

It ended with a
Kiss,

And all that passed between
Was just a whole lot of
Heartache.

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  • Melee Vau gold member
    November 25
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    pretty bleak view - only heartache, no bliss between the kiss?
    I like the way you phrase this short piece with the middle at the end. well written.


  • Nyafushia gold member
    November 8
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    Oh how I know this one!!!
    Heartache... ugggh! Too often it can be a byeproduct of loving!


  • bigperm gold member
    November 5

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    When you are in love and you get hurt, it is like a cut--it will heal but there will always be a scar.


  • fallendust
    November 5

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    This is oober short yet it is a wonderful piece. Very well written and I enjoyed it. You summed up most relationships.