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freedom of man

i don't wont to be king
i don't wont to be leader its not my place
not as ruler of the human race
i try to help everyone

wont to help people
not to conquer and enslave
from the cradle to the grave

i can hear the march of men mindlessly going to war
for king and country ,but not the people
i don't wont to be a brute
making your voices mute

fear and greed has taken men's souls
don't fret the pain were having now is the passing of greed
of men who fear human kindness and humanity

don't let them put fear into you , tell you how to act
what to think and feel!you don't hate only the unloved hate, the unloved and unnatural
you arnt cattle , cannon fodder , your life has value
brutes has risen to power , with pretty words and smiles
they lie they free themselves but enslave you , the people

freedom is in all people not one man or group of men but in all
not on paper of rights , but no one really fights over
we need kindness and gentleness
we think to much and feel to little

let us fight for a better world free
free to live without blood shead or hate
but this its just words , because even now
men are blind , by pain

time too see , from the humanity within
we are men not numbers but free if we let ourselves be

the question is ... will you let it be so?  

just something i wont poeple to find the meaning not on this screen but inside

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  • BrokenSanity
    November 7

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    War is inevitable, my dear friend... I accepted that long ago. Well written, it flowed brilliantly! Hope you are well... my lady! Charlie x

  • There are two or three words that aren't spelled right and a couple of places where it looks as if you used the wrong form of a word, but other than that this is an awesome write and you did a great job with it. Keep on writing