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~Haiku #37~


a deer trembles
in Autumn’s morning mist –
a cougar waits


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  • hezakiah
    2 days ago
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    I like this haiku; it gives an instance and the 'aha' moment explains it.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 7
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  • Tqop
    November 6

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    Go away cougar. Be careful deer. I can see this happening. Great job on the discription.