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~Haiku #36~



the grass moves
in the twilight -
hedgehogs hunting

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  • Shantti silver member
    December 1
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    Gotta love the hedge hog!!!! Love the grass and images here.... beautifully done
    Thank you for entering

  • hezakiah
    November 25
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    I like this image. I understood it as the hedgehogs were doing the hunting.


  • Tqop
    November 6

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    Sounds beautiful, but sad. I don't like poor animals suffering.