Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

~Haiku #35~


in warm eiderdown
by icy pond -
ducklings skate


A contest entry

Honest Critique Requested

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Tqop
    November 6

    Edit | Reply
    I love this. The ducklings skate in the pond. I love this picture.