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dappled

dappled in shadows
interstices of autumn
catch in the branches

A contest entry

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  • Shantti silver member
    1 day ago
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    This is beautiful. I love the sense of the season this captures. Wonderfully done, thank you for entering


  • Tqop
    November 6

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    Lovely. Poems like these make me apprecite autumn.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 5

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    Wow!

    I love this. This is perfection in Ku for Autumn! I would have never thought of using the word dappled or interstices like this, but it creates a vivid image that's so succinct! Bravo for this. All the best in the contest. I want to enter my Ku but now I'm greatly intimidated. I'll get over it. I love to write Ku...even when I'm not very good at it! Hugs...


  • Ez Writer silver member
    November 5
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    An exquisite Haiku thank you !
    A delight to read indeed ...
    Best wishes & hugs , friend Easy