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Where did my weight go?
Slim already!

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 14
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    good name


  • Kari gold member
    November 5
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    I wish that I was indeed slim already! Thanks for the names

  • thedaveformula
    November 5

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    great

    it's only two lines but i'm on the mind that anything is a poem if it expresses the feelings of the writer. im not into didactic teaching of rhetoric, in other words, anything goes.


    • crimsondew
      November 6
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      thanks for checking out this page, but there is no poetry on this page, they are names for a weight loss site...