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If Only.....

Mornings lately have become so hard
The weather is dark and cold
I know I am far from it
But man, today I feel so old

I leave the house
Every morning at eight
Walking to bus stop
In the harsh cold wind I stand and wait

With every heavy step I take
As the leaves crunch under my feet
I long to be somewhere else
Somewhere warm and filled with heat

Winter is coming
I want to stay in and hide
If only I was a bear
I would be warm and comfy hibernating inside

Author notes

prompt 29. as the leaves crunch under my feet... This is exactly how i felt this morning on the school run! wanted to still be in bed!!

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  • leo2
    November 7

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    The title caught my eye this morning and as I read the verses it reminded me of how fortunate I am to be gainfully employed...lol. Even though the daily grind is unBearable at times the alternative is much worse. Good luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • spiritual wolf
    November 5
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    i love your take on the prompt. that was a great write. i absoltutly loved it