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Unsettled superiority

Nature dictates terms
man fights not to obey it
anybody's game

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Haiku

Prompt: “Nature is more advanced than people.
Every snail has a home.”
– Lu Wong

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  • Concrete Angel silver member
    November 7

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    Wonderful haiku! I think this is the first actual haiku entered in this contest too! SO props to you on that! And your words are all too true. We fight and fight not to obey nature, but in the end we are subjected to her fury time and again so it really is anybody's game. (But I think she wins most of the innings lol) Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 5

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    so true splendid write!!

    love and blessings

    Rend